Anatomy of a headline
October 4th, 2007 | by Brook Durant |
Anatomy of a headline
One of my greatest challenges as a blogger is writing strong headlines. Fleshing out a strong, appealing, click-worthy headline can be a daunting task if you haven’t prepared yourself for it. There are some general rules to keep in mind as you are preparing a headline. I’ve managed to break down the practical anatomy of a headline into 6 distinct parts.
An appealing headline…
- 1) …is short
- The goal of the headline isn’t to write the entire article in abridged format. I see a lot of excessively long headlines because people were trying to fit the “great American novel” into it. I’ve heard 3-7 words is the most effective range of sizes for headlines. Less and you can’t express the intent of the article and more is simply overkill.
- 2) …offers value
- One of the very first things that a good headline should convey is the value that is in store for the reader when they click on the article to read it.
- 3) …addresses someone
- It is about building a relationship with your reader from the moment they set eyes on your article. The better you are at making a reader “believe” you are addressing them directly the more likely they will stop and take notice. The trick is to make it personal using impersonal words like “you”.
- 4) …is honest
- Readers will smell something fishy within the first two or three sentences if you drew them in with a dishonest headline. Unless your content is really strong you can pretty much kiss the reader goodbye, forever.
- 5) …speaks a common language
- So often I see headlines that make no sense because it speaks another language. Figuratively, not literally. If a 7th grader can’t understand your headline, rewrite it.
- 6) …takes time to develop
- I’ve read that some people suggest you should sit on an article for a few days before you try to write a headline for it. To me that seems a bit excessive, but you should spend some time on it and try out a few before you decide on one.
Ultimately the headline has to promise value both to the reader. If you’re reading this article there’s a really good chance you started doing so because of the title not because you just happen to be a nice guy (or gal). If the headline doesn’t promise value you wouldn’t stop to spend your time reading.
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By April on Oct 4, 2007
I found that copyblogger.com has some amazing tips. It’s not something that comes naturally to me..
By A Blog about Nothing on Oct 4, 2007
April - Yes copyblogger does have some great tips about headline writing. I don’t think it really comes “naturally” for anyone to begin with.
By David on Oct 4, 2007
Re point 6, this reminds me of an anecdote I heard about someone writing a full page letter then saying ’sorry for writing such a long letter, I didn’t have time to write a short one.’
Just to play devils advocate though, ‘Blink’ (the bestselling book) talks about how, quite often, the first thing that pops into your head will be the best thing!?!
By A Blog about Nothing on Oct 4, 2007
David - Thanks for the comment. First time I’ve heard that anecdote, but it is so true. I don’t know if I agree that the first one is the best one, but I do think you should stay on the same track of ideas as your first title that came to mind.